Friday, February 24, 2012

Can you help me find the errors in these sentences??

1. Most amphibians animals who live partly on land and partly on water are nocturnal,too.
2. Bats often rest on barn roofs hanging upside down.
3. This month’s telephone bill which is in the right-hand desk drawer is due tomorrow.
4. Before the experiment can continue everything in the test tubes should be measure.
5. Scott Woodard who is an audio engineer makes recorded music sound like a live performance.
6. Whomever is nominated will run unopposed.
7. Major Meyers is the officer to who this troop reports.
8. One of the uncontrollable side effects of radiation treatment is known as “radiation sickness.” Which may involve nausea, fatigue, loss of appetite, and vomiting.
9. A free bibliography can also be obtained by writing to the Shedd aquarium, located at 122 S Lake shore dr., Chicago il.
10. The pastel drawings are lovely however they should be sprayed with a fixative.|||1. Amphibians animals is redundant.
2. Change the sentence so hanging upside down isn't modifying barn roofs.
3. Take out which is.
4. Should be measured.
5. Who is is unnecessary.
6. Whoever.
7. I think this should be whom.
8. Join the two sentences.
9. Don't know what's wrong with this one- maybe some capitalization errors.
10. Run-on.|||do it ur self u lazy bum!!! dont cheat!

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